Grim hope

Life of grim hope
Hanging on a thin rope
Any change has no scope
So let it be and cope

Life full of shame
Wild passion to tame
Any change seems lame
So everyone gets the blame

Life hidden in the dark
Without a bit of spark
Any change leaves a mark
So go on with your lark

Life guided only by fate
No matter if you walk straight
Any change is third rate
So continue your only trait

Life dances around death
Even with best of health
Any change affects stealth
So we live on illusive wealth

6 comments:

romance said...

WOW

Advaitavedanti said...

Thanks for visiting often and leaving your comments.

romance said...

Its a pleasure to read your writings sir.I have been following your blogs since 2006.

Advaitavedanti said...

I don't remember your comment(s) from 2006, perhaps you started leaving comments only now. Then again, I haven't a great memory either!

Thanks again, but for "Sir"?! :)

romance said...

I used to comment as anonymous and you write so well that sometimes I am just satisfied by reading your blogs:)it feels like “who am I to comment?"

Advaitavedanti said...

Haha, thanks for the flattery! :)

Nothing like that, please comment whenever you feel like. Disagreement too is a part of the learning process for all of us.